Feedback on my pitch

I recently pitched my film idea. I got quite a few valid points of feedback: 

Cast and Crew: 
In my pitch, I mentioned that I would have four cast members. Three antagonists and one protagonist. At the time I had no idea who I wanted to cast, I knew that I wanted adult actors to play the parents of the teenager instead of people of the same age as me because I wanted it to have a realistic effect on the audience. I had a total of 4 people working behind the scenes of the film that helped with filming and script writing. 

Documenting the process:
Over the the past couple of months I have been Vlogging, researching and blogging about my experience with creating the film. Jo mentioned that this would really important, I did four sets of Primary and Secondary research. The research that helped me the mot out of the eight was the mockumentary research as I saw the kind of view points and camera angles that were included within mockumentaries such as "This Country" and "The Office" (The UK version). I also looked at what kind of sound effects they included and it was mostly Diegetic.    

Survey/Focus group:
The most important piece of advice that I got given was to create a survey based on the stereotypes of teenagers I thought it was very important to conduct a survey as I wanted to see multiple view points from people of different ages. I ended up doing a vox pop and a survey due to that fact that my results didn't vary as much when it came to the survey so I decided to approach people of different age groups face to face to get their instant reaction to the questions.  

Link to my pitch:
https://drive.google.com/open?id=1douvLZW-TbTW2PSkt4PT82kM7Sz6YcbO

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