peer assessment

Was my project successful? If not, why?

It had a very good story line at the beginning but as it progressed I didn't understand it. It was mainly do to the actor improvising the script when it wasn't necessary. 

 I loved the colour tint on the film especially at the beginning when they are sitting opposite each other  and the sunlight was seeping through the blinds. the blue colour really adds a positive effect on the film. 
I really enjoyed the title sequence when it fades into the main title of "many a moon" and the music in the background seems like those sounds are coming from the forest. It has a lot of resemblance to the German TV series "Dark". So, therefore I thought it was successful



 What would you change about my film?

 I would most likely change the length of the film as well as add ending credits. As far as effects goes I wouldn't change it at all.
What did/didn't you enjoy about it?

I really liked the title sequence and the actor with the afro I thought he fit the part really well. 
  























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